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My first Appledash by MakotoNanayaFan68 My first Appledash by MakotoNanayaFan68
I needed to contribute to the Appledash club. I am on a roll today! Two deviants in one day, new personal record. :meow:
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MLP-OC-Creators-Wiki Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Professional Filmographer
I'm sure he didn't MEAN for Applejack to be touching Dash's vajayjay 
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DancingTigers Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
DONT PUT PORN!
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TogetickloversNEwPlc Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AJ: You know, we would make da perfect couple
RD: (Does not approve)
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LieutenantShinyPants Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student General Artist
1. Blank Flanks
2. Ewwww
3. Staaaaash
4. Not real art
5. Needs Credit
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gabyamaris Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
what blank flanks ?!
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MyLittleGuillotine Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dash is like TAKE ME lawl
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KelladaWolf Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
yay! good for you!
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xRoBoTiCtSuNaMix Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
... Pony creator isn't real art.
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ParanormalPony2012 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
this was made with the pony creator
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lawlzers101 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
I think I might know why the cutie marks aren't there *trollface* like I would tell you though :3
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Delousionist Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Student Photographer
Cutie marks?
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rainbowdashy123 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Cutie marks??? Besides that its really good
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TastetheRainbow111 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
i think RD doesn't like being on the bottom
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drake-rex Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Congratulation for breaking your record :la:
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InuYashaluver1234 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Student Filmographer
Appledash FTW!!!! :la:
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JimmieJohnson48fan Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Applejack is touching Rainbow's no no place! sweet XDDD
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Ragnarokia Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Rainbow Dash may be giving the look she doesn't want, but that blush can't lie.
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cappydarn Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011
Applejack`s colours are a tiny bit off. >.<
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PinkiePocalypse Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Student
^
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CloudRunnerTeeny Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Student Writer
i can see pony creator was used for this but hey i still like whats goin on here *puts on sunglasses* carry on girls lol
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Ciclopotis Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011
Is she... that hoof... wha- Oh... my!
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HNNNNNGHHH Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yes. She found the end of the "Rainbow", and is about to find out how "Magical" friendship is.
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HNNNNNGHHH Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Apple Jack: Can I taste the rainbow?
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MakotoNanayaFan68 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011
Rainbow Dash: As long as you let me taste those sweet apples you're always going on about! lol
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HaraKisuki Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Student Digital Artist
:D
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SugarCube16 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely stuff. Who cares about the pony maker? ;)
:heart:
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Amelia-Seyruun Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011
Adorable. =3
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Fundz64 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:icondashshutupplz:.. you used general's Zoi Pony makaer... didnt you? :D
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MakotoNanayaFan68 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011
:( Yeah, but i'm not a very good artist and I love all the Appledash submissions, so this the best I could do!
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Adan-Cricjer Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is actually a pretty good picture. The contours, shapes of the characters, and proportions are all spot on and for the most part they move properly. (I imagine the cutie marks are absent due to getting the hang of the illustration program you are using.) May need to recolour AJ's hair ties as red, unless there was a technical problem that kept you from doing so. (It does throw off the colour balance.)

The only big problem is the weirdness of Dash's back and tail. I assume she's meant to be lying on some sort of surface? With the way her legs and arms are splayed out I imagine her back and wing would flatten accordingly as though she was on the ground or bed. (Likewise the part of her torso facing upwards would rise up a bit.) And the curvature of her tail facing the surface would flatten as well. As its stands it looks as though only her back is resting on something separate from the rest of her body and something else is stretching out her arms and legs.

Of course I've never done vectors before and I'm not sure what challenges you faced drawing this. Otherwise a good effort though. You clearly have a lot of the fundamentals done pat.
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Adan-Cricjer Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Actually disregard my comments about the structure of Dash's body and AJ's hair ties...I read the comments on the other piece and the ones here again and I just realized you used an online program specifically meant for producing images of ponies...which means you were probably much more constrained than what you could do with a normal illustration program. (Yeah my weekend has been like this...)

Still, quite a good job and choice of poses. It's one of those images that tells a story, but leaves a lot of ambiguity as to what the story means. Why is AJ smiling so intently, and why is Dash blushing while looking rather sour? That intrigues me.
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Norfolk309 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
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Its SO CUTE!
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